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How do you like my story so far?
This is really a sneak peak,and you cannot steal it i sent it 2 b published its a COPYRIGHT now.

sneak peak # 1:
Copels soul may be darker than most,and maybe not the most outgoing.But her soul felt love,as anyone else.And it hurt,like everyone else.It hurt so bad as Copel stood there and watched Aqua suffer.She had taught Copel so much.But she had taught something Copel could never take back.She taught her to love.And she was in love with Anthony of Magical,not Dillion (Dylan) Of Seria.She had been blind,and had not had a chance to save her best friend.Copels heart was growing dull,as the tenth Sodiak of Knomee grinned eagerly at Aqua’s suffering."You see,Copel,do not ever get close to someone.You will never get what you wish most." Said the Tenth Sodiak.He laughed,and the flames grew over the dull,lit cave.Copel felt tears slip down her pale cheek."No.Love always wins.It will always succeed!" Retorted Copel."We will see." Said the man,and he walked over to Aqua,who stood in the middle of the circle,where the magic slowly tortured her."Will THIS love win?" he asked,and with a flick of his hand,the Tenth Sodiak of Knomee jammed the sword into Aquas heart.
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So,I know you dont know the characters and all,so I will take you back to where Copel meets Dillion of Seria,and Anthony,of Magical.

sneak peak # 2:

Copel knew the man would not hurt her,but she couldnt help but have a hinch of fear in her eyes.Asd the man took her,Sage,and Kara in,he noticed.He smiled,showing off his brilliant row of straight teeth,and his jet black hair flipped over his dark brown eyes."Do not alarm yourselves,children." He replied.Kara stiffened up.Kids? "I am only fourteen! I am nothing of a child." Snapped Kara,stubbornly.Sage didn’t like him,either.But Copel,she could not help but stare into his mysterious eyes.She liked him.He was so fair,it hurt her eyes to look at his beauty.The man held his hands up,innocently."I apologize." He fixed his eyes on Sage.Kara rolled her eyes."Anyway,you only look about fifteen yourself!" The man flickered a look at her and back at Sage."Eighteen." He smiled at Sage."What are you,’Ladies’,doing out here in the woods?" He had said them all,but seemed he was just talking to Sage.Sage rolled her eyes,but he didn’t notice."I am Dillion,of Seria,a village not far from here."

Sneak peak # 3:

Copel stared halfheartedly at the faries around them."Do not touch them,they are very dangerous.They make a sound,and it can make anyone go blind.They fight furiously in battle." warned Dillion,guiding them along the bridge.Kara stared stingingly at him.He was not her type.Kara thought of him as a showoff."Dillion,where is Seria,this town you speak of,we need to get somewhere quick,before the magic catches up to us." blurted out Kara,annoyingly."Not far.Accross the valleys above the bridge." Said Dillion,and Copel was impressed.

NEXT SCENE (Sorry,I cant show you EVERYTHING…)

Sage walked into the village gates first."THIS is Seria? The oh,so fascinating village?" Laughed Kara. Dillion was not happy."This village is full of magic." He replied,angry she was not well impressed.As Copel walked into the village,Dillion led them to a big house."This is Anthony,of Magical." introduced Dillion. Kara rolled her eyes."If he is from a village called Magical,why is he here?" A man with light,brown hair that went a little past his ears,walked in.His eyes shined a Jade green,and he had a fair face.He was suited in shiny,black and gold armor."Anthony is here,because he is training for a battle.Another common village called Theral has magical creatures,such as Magical.Theral’s creatures are going into the minds of Magical’s creatures,and they are turning against the villages." Explained Dillion.

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sneak peak # 4 -LAST BUT NOT LEAST-

Kara didn’t know what to think anymore.Almost everyone was dead,yet her feelings were numb.Kara helplessly stared down from the slick,cliff.Ripper had instructed her to watch the war,not be in it.Where was Copel? Sage was with Ripper.And Dillion had gone back to find Hazel.Kara lightened up as she saw Anthony striding in the middle of the chaos,and was slicing,and stabbing.The ground was stained with blood.Copel was lost,alone in the woods.Kara hoped she was ok.Karas eyes widened as she saw Copel,looking for Anthony,near the side of the war.She tried to shout,to make her move,to tell her to get out of the way.But a knight had ran over,and Anthony had saw.Anthony sprinted accross the feild,but as he got behind her,the blade of a sword was jabbed through her chest.Anthony caught her shoulders,and his eyes watered.
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I can’t tell you what the girls look like,I gtg but answer these questions

1.Whos your fav character?

2.Whos your LEAST fav?

3.Whats your fav part?

4.what part did you hate?

5.did you like the story,does it make you want to read more?

6.If any,

MEL J | Nov 10, 2009